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Philip

I'm a bit worried though, are the girls in the background always just sitting there and watching? I would have expected d that they'd spoil each other in the background with intense lesbian action and a lot of kissing, licking, fingering each other while you fuck them, one after the other. I mean, that you have the full attention of all 14 girls is pretty cool but it's kind of creepy to just have them all looking at you all the time. It also kills of the vibe if there is more or less just two people having sex and fun in the room, that's not how such a scene is imho supposed to be...

Maybe it's just me, but that's why I suggested the 270° vision so that the girls can spread to the sides and not everybody needs to be positioned kind of behind the girl that is fucked right now. In my dream harem scenario you e.g. have like 3 girls spoiling you in the foreground, some girls spoiling each other in the background and another few girls spoiling each other to the right and the left of you so that you can look around and always see sexy action. I hope that something like this will be made in the future, maybe with another entry in harem series. But my comment is of course only based on the stuff I've seen in the trailer and preview pics. 😉

      Late to this but remember when Bruce Wayne basically bought a ballet troupe and took them on his yacht? What would he (or just a billionaire) do with them in this context? hmmm. lots of tights, oils, etc.

        dbrandrp What would he (or just a billionaire) do with them in this context?

        Ignore them, jump from the boat and get Lao back into Gordon's jurisdiction?

            LordCrash In my dream harem scenario you e.g. have like 3 girls spoiling you in the foreground, some girls spoiling each other in the background and another few girls spoiling each other to the right and the left of you so that you can look around and always see sexy action.

            Respectfully I understand what you’re saying, but that’s not a harem, it’s an orgy where you happen to be the only guy. Different thing entirely. A harem means all the girls want to be the next one fucking you, which is why they’re all trying to get and keep your eye contact. You’re Eddie Van Halen and just walked into your dressing room backstage after your best performance and two dozen girls cherry picked from the audience are desperate to be the first one you dip into. So yes I agree it’s pretty stupid if most of them are sitting off in the distance bored and just looking at you. It would be far better if they’re swarming around you. They may start kissing each other while they’re trying to kiss you, but they keep eye contact hoping you notice the show they’re putting on, all the while hoping you pick them to fuck next. That’s my dream harem.

            I’m all for that orgy scenario too btw. Nothing wrong with pretty girls getting into each other 😛

                argyle43 Different thing entirely.

                Not really. Nowhere did I say that the girls shouldn't wait and shouldn't be excited for being selected to fuck you, one after the other. The girls shouldn't stay in the background all the time, just being there for the visuals (I guess that's what planned for the partnership with Party Hardcore though). But as you said, I do think the girls should somewhat be "occupied" while waiting. In the trailer it looks like they're just sitting there doing pretty much nothing which is imho kind of awkward. I want a "natural" scenario in which there is real action and energy and everything. The girls should be in the vibe and be excited. This is way too tame for what I envision a perfect harem scene.

                But sure, no scene will please everyone. Some might like this approach, I just voice my take on it. And whether you call it harem or orgy doesn't matter at all, that's just words. In the end, it's a scene with one guy (you) and a whole bunch of girls. That's the bottom line, everything else is just playing to different kinks and expectations.

                    Philip Damn, I was scared at first, the video doesn't start in POV, I thought the whole video was like that, but no. Phew

                      LordCrash looks like they're just sitting there doing pretty much nothing which is imho kind of awkward

                      agreed. I really hope this isn’t the case throughout this shoot, but am suspecting it’s what we’ll see. Several JAV 2D and 3D shoots have captured what I consider to be perfect harem scenarios. If it weren’t for their stupid censorship I’d be fine and dandy and probably never need a Western studio to try to get Western girls to do the same. Anyway I can see from the trailer this shoot probably isn’t going to be it so I’ll just keep hoping that one of these days the right director and cast come together to bottle some lightning.

                        Just watched it and the cast is absolutely amazing 👏

                        2 points of improvement:
                        1) More positions (primarily cowgirl now)
                        2) If the guy is lying on the floor you could do more with the 200° view. Girls could stand above him, besides him, etc. There is limited action at the same time now whereas there are enough girls around 😉

                        I put up initial feedback which I’m taking down for the moment. Having gotten past the first twenty minutes which I personally had some problems with, now that Jenny has kicked off the cowgirl, this has gotten very fun indeed. What a feast of beauty here before me. So many beautiful women 🥰 Best I save the constructive criticism I have for a bit later once some other discussion has happened… once again, @doublevr and team, thank you for making this happen!!

                        Going to leave my full review of Part 1 tomorrow (Sunday), but wanted to mention two things:

                        1) Wow, already a script?! That's impressive. @RealcumberScripts must have worked overtime on this one!
                        2) When will Part 2 release? I feel like I need to see the whole scene before I can really have final thoughts on it.

                        Thank you SLR. What a huge day!

                        FreyaSLR @FreyaSLR would love to know which one of the beautiful girls is doing the blowjob in this break time photo. With an attitude like that she would move to the top of the rankings.

                          Okay, after watching the whole thing through, here are my comments for PART 1 (only).

                          The "Good"

                          • Great cast: Probably one of the more difficult things to nail down for a group of this size, but you did. Just wonderful cast of gorgeous (mostly Czech) women, with similar natural looks and styles.
                          • Controlled: This was one of my initial concerns, that big group scenes can get too rowdy and chaotic. In this scene, there was no yelling, excessive laughing, or idle chatter (like I've seen in other group scenes), which usually just kills the mood. This scene had a solid sensual tone throughout. Great job.
                          • Fantastic cowgirl: Some really great moments of cowgirl here, which is perfect for interactive scripts, and it was executed well. Good passionate performances. Some really didn't want to get off! Props to Nick for being able to power through all of that!
                          • Nice views: It took some time to get more people in view (during cowgirl), but in the last 20-30 mins of the scene, it was a beautiful panoramic vista of sexy women filling up the central-horizontal FOV. But more on this later...
                          • Clean tech: Everything looked clear and crisp, lighting was great, good directional audio, all the stuff that we expect from SLRO in this regard was good. Also, having 200 fisheye for this harem scene is definitely a big plus.
                          • Assistant director: As in Zuzu. Not sure if she was specifically tasked with being the on-screen director, but she was 100% necessary as she helped guide the others what to do. Ex: She tried to get certain groups suck the stunt cock together (the blondes, the raven-hairs). She tried to get other women to lick the viewer's nipples during cowgirl (personal favorite). She even told some women to come out from being behind so that the cameras could see them. She was one of the few that actually whispered into the viewer's ears, and actually spoke to the POV. Perhaps not a lot of the women are as confident with their English skills as Zuzu, but that extra connection that Zuzu did was really good.

                          The "Needs Improvement"

                          • More interaction with the viewer: This was definitely lacking. Let's do the math. A dude has 1 cock, 2 balls, 2 sides, 2 ears, 2 nipples, 2 cheeks, 1 mouth, 1 neck. There were 14 women in this scene, but in the majority of the scene they only focused on the cock. There were a handful of brief moments of dirty talk into the ears. Probably about a minute of male nipple licking (and I get a sense there was more as soon as it switched to seated POV but the editors edited it out? That's a bummer...) But aside from that... there wasn't much physical contact (or simulated contact) between the women and the viewer. And this is what DRASTICALLY needs to improve. Kiss the viewer! Lick his ears! Lick his face! Suck his nipples! Toss his salad! Juggle his balls! Cuddle next to him! Stand over him! Straddle his sides! Cuddle around him! Suffocate him with boobs! Suffocate him with ass! Grind on him everywhere! Don't let him breathe!
                          • Break the horizontal plane: Overall, 80% of the action was happening in front of the viewer. Even the stuff on the sides are still "in front". But there needs to be less % front and center, and more happening directly BESIDE the viewer. Not front and side. BESIDE. Same goes for down below and up above. Down below, need more action so when the viewer tilts his head down, he sees women all over his body. When the viewer tilts his head up, there should be breasts hanging down towards him. Especially for a sofa scenario, there could be women from behind the sofa that interact with the viewer. Imagine having their hands wrapped around the viewer's shoulders, or their faces peering from the sides of the viewer's headsets, kissing his neck or cheeks or licking his ears. There could be so much more happening all around the viewer, instead of just in front. I would love to see more creativity with this in future episodes.

                          Minor "Suggestions"

                          • Legs-down cowgirl: With these big group scenes, it may be better to have the women do legs-down cowgirl, instead of squatting cowgirl. With those squatting cowgirl, it takes up a lot of visual real estate, and also prevents other women from getting close to the viewer. Legs-down is less obtrusive.
                          • Reverse cowgirl: I do love forward cowgirl (it is my fav position in VR), but it would have been good to have some reverse cowgirl in here too. This would open up a little more space for other women to come forward and get all up on the viewer's body and face. Also, it would just add a little more variety.
                          • Ditch the Non-POV intro: Hear me out. I don't mind non-POV VR scenes. And this is not an argument about other dicks in VR (it's not about that). However, let's be logical here with regard to a harem scenario. I would venture that most harem fans are a bit on the greedy selfish side (guilty as charged). We want 10+ women all to ourselves!! No other guys, just ourself. So you can imagine, to have this scene start out with non-POV in VR, it's basically us looking at some other dude, getting surrounded and teased by all 14 women, while we sit here and watch. Some of the women even turn to the camera and acknowledge the viewer, making it almost like a cuckold scene. "Well just skip the first 10 mins" The thing about that is... the first 10 mins would have been amazing in POV. This is the TEASE section. When all of them are undressing around him, giving him those eyes and smiles, all that anticipation and seduction. It is all lost if we don't have that part in POV. That's a huge deal when it comes to VR: that build up.
                          • Have carpet: Haha, this sounds dumb, but during the BJ section, they are all on their knees on hardwood. With so many women, being so careful about putting their knees on a pillow, and all of them unable to easily come forward to the viewer, it adds sort of an obstacle that could be avoided.

                          All in all, I think it's an incredible scene (so far), and just a phenomenal way to start off this SLR Harem series. Yes, I do have some appetite that is not quite filled, as seen in my "Needs Improvement" section, but maybe some of it will be satisfied in Part 2! And even if they aren't, I can already say with 100% honesty that this harem scene is better than most. So I like how things are shaping up =))))).

                          Thank you to all the hard work for getting this done, to SLR, the crew, the director, and of course the performers. Dream come true for us harem fans! @doublevr @Philip @FreyaSLR