g2kbuffetboy Okay, after watching the whole thing through, here are my comments for PART 1 (only).
What an amazing review and feedback as always, brotha! Perfect! Everything is on point! These are the things we really need to see to make the future harem scenes better!!👆 😎👍
But, as a fellow harem fan, I would like to add some of my thoughts.
@Philip @FreyaSLR @doublevr
Firstly, I want to start with three negative points. You know me, I'm not trying to offend anybody here. And I was so excited for the opening teasing scene. But, if I'm going to be completely honest, I didn't really like how it felt like I was watching a voyeur scene. (Which is not a problem in other videos if you're into that stuff, but this shouldn't exist in a harem scene.) And dude... this particular scene made me confused and killed my raging hyped boner... especially when some of the girls looked at the camera, It was almost like a cuckolding scene.... (In my opinion, the whole point of harem, is that "we" are the center of attention. And that should always be the case.)
This teasing scene should've been shot in our POV, and also could've been an insanely immersive scene...👇😢
(This might just be me, but I was imagining that some of the girls rotates around us in POV style, because I want to see all 14 girls' pretty faces.) 👆
Secondly, during the cowgirl scene, It felt like the girls in the background were just watching the entire video, even though that wasn't really the case.
And thirdly, I think the girls should've been a lot closer. And so, I edited this photo and rearranged their positions (I hope you guys don't mind). With a little bit of your imagination, I promise this will make sense... And I'm sure there are numerous options, but I'll just show you this and say something for each "numbers". 😝
Just keep in mind that I wrote these for similar harem scenes in the future as well. And before you guys read any further, I encourage you to open a separate window, or make sure to have another screen for this photo, so it won't confuse you that much. XD (Sorry in advance...) 🤣
Here are some things that I wished I saw / More Interaction for the next harem scenes later in the future:
- 1. I was hoping that each / most girls leaned forward during cowgirl for a 30secs or a minute or so... (And I know this scene is really crowded, but still I want to see their pretty faces really close.) And this shouldn't be a problem, especially if we the don't count the voyeur scene.
- 2-3. Standing behind Jenny, and right below Nick's legs (left and right). Maybe even playing with her tits or kissing her cheeks / lips.
- 4-5. Kneeling. Caressing Jenny's hip / legs. (Waiting for their turn while giving us eye-contact - This goes for all the girls.)
- 6-7. They could either be touching "our" stomach while lying down / sitting, or kneeling next to 4-5. Now, 6 could also start kissing with 4 (same thing with 7 and 5).
- 8-9. Lying down. Kissing the guy's chest or licking his nipples. <~ (A lot VR studios are actually starting to do include this.) But also, It would've been nice if they talk dirty and whisper lots of dirty things... Additionally, 8 could've make out with 6 (same thing with 9 and 7), but if you do this for future harem scenes, it would be nice if it's not "mirrored"; meaning, one girl should be whispering, while the other two girls are kissing on the other side. Plus, from time to time, it would be hot if both girls kiss our cheeks / lips. (And to add more variety, 8-9 could start kissing each other right before another girl starts riding.)
- 10-11. Standing with their legs spread and playing with their pussies. Or, move backwards to kiss 12-13. Also, both girls could move behind the camera and whispers close to our ears while 8-9 are doing their jobs.
- 12-13. Same thing above. Or alternatively, let 12-13 move forward to kiss 10-11 and play with each other. (This might be difficult due to not enough space, but it's an option.)
- 14. She can pretty much do whatever she wants and move around freely. She could kiss and just have a good time with 1-2, 10-11 and 12-13. Or better yet, she could move behind the camera for a little bit and starts talking dirty, while 8-9 are kissing our chest or something. (For the most part, 14 could've been Zuzu, since she was pretty much telling the girls what to do.)
- 4-5 & 14 / 1 & 2-3 / 2-3 & 14 (Any combination really... ) Give us more triple team blowjob. (Three girls at the same! Yes, please!!) Play with the balls. Handjob with 2 or 3 girls. Even if it's just for a few seconds, make it wetter for the next girl! You get the idea...
(Looking at some of BTS pics here again, some of these would probably in part 2.)
Rotation / Staying active:
- But the important part here (for me), is that 8-9 (and 1 obviously) should rotates / change, especially when there are 14 girls. Alternatively, when you change the 8-9, 6-7 should take 8-9's jobs. Then, at the same time 4-5 move forward, and so on and so forth. But this doesn't mean you shouldn't mix it up or add more variety. In other words, their roles are constantly changing.
- When it comes to rotation, I would prefer two or three new girls each time for standing blowjob (please do more seated blowjob). But I understand that this is most likely intentional, because of the the title - "Take Your Pick".
- Three girls giving us blowjob, while the rest are kissing (well, not all of them at same) and making eye contact to the viewer.
- During the standing blowjob scene, It would've been better if there was one or two girls standing besides us. Again, kissing our chest / nipples, POV Kisses, dirty talk, whisper, etc. (Preferably rotate this as well in the future.) Especially in this scene, some of the girls were kneeling down without any pillow...
- And without any pillows, there should be more girls standing during the standing blowjob scene. I mean, This might just be me, but with 14 girls, there should be at least one girl standing behind the camera or beside the viewer, for dirty talking and giving a handjob (you'll see this on CzechVR).
I hope everything made sense so far... (are you still with me? 😝) The point is, the girls should be a lot closer and a lot active when it comes to pleasing us, rather than just giving us eye-contact during the cowgirl scene, especially the girls that are closer to us.
Or, something like this. (More on this specific JAV VR video later...) 😉
Engaging The Viewer More / Be More Vocal: Examples for the future harem scene(s) 🤤
- Zuzu: Time's up. Next girl, please. / Who wants to go next?
- Cowgirl: Please let me ride more!
- Other girls: (raises their arms)
- Other girls that are closer to us: After her, please let me do it next...
- (Of course, it doesn't have to be loud / aggressive.) But speaking of loud... Once again, since we are talking about harem, I'm linking the multi episode thread for a harem "Catfight" scene. In this case, the louder and aggressive, the better!! But whispers are acceptable as well. (Although, to me, "Catfight" are still hot regardless of how many girl there are in front of me, and whether it's a harem or just a regular threesome scene, or how loud they are. They just need to aggressively fight over "our" attention. That's the I'mportant part!) 👈
Before I move on to the next thing...
Remember what Melody Marks said during her interview? "I AM THEIR QUEEN.", "I want all the attention.", "I want all the hands on me all the time.", "I want all the lips on me all the time." <~ These, but with girls. Basically (at least 7-10 girls), I really wanted them to be really close to the viewer and active at the same. (And change the Queen into King.) 😉
(And you know what? FROM A MALE PERSPECTIVE, what Melody said are also really good reasons to not do non-POV / voyeur opening teasing scenes, especially for harem.) We all want the attention, right, my harem brothers?! 🔥👈🙏🏼
Also, If you guys included more whispers, dirty talk, and use their numbers and the surroundings / 3d space to your advantage, I would be able to feel their touch with just the sound of their voice:
Ok, so what do I mean by these? Some of the girls during certain parts of the cowgirl scene, wasn't really doing anything other than watching or chatting. The idea is that (at least in my dreams)14 girls surrounding one guy, and all of them are trying their hardest to give us the best pleasure experience. 👈
Honestly, the language barrier shouldn't be an excuse at all. And the girls who are confident with their English could've just translate some of the lines that are closer to us - "She wants your cock". It doesn't have to be an exact translation. But really, speak in English even if it's basic only. And besides (I don't know about you), but languages are sexy anyways, especially during sex. So even without a single translation, it's perfectly fine! 😍
Plus, since we wouldn't be able to feel their touch; whispering, ASMR and all the sound elements should always come into play, alongside with all the action and visuals. (this includes for every VR scenes). And if you read some of my reviews before, you know that I mentioned how it important it is to increase the illusion and immersion for the viewer.
Closer / Far away:
Some of you might remember that I talked about this pic in 2020 (originally, I only showed one picture) but I'm going to talk about it again, even though this is somewhat off topic - The reason why I'm mentioning this again, and I know I said that the girls needs to be closer (this is obviously an exception), but girls waiting for their turn is so hot to me. (I hope I'm not the only one)...
For a future harem scene (whether it's Czech, Japanese, American, or any Ethnicity really), It would make me really happy if you guys do one of these exactly... 🙏🏼
(But I know it's probably just me... So I have more suggestions):
- They can line up as a group of 2 / 3 girls out of 15-20 girls for seated blowjob. 1-2 minutes for each groups.
- Or Alternatively, instead of seated cowgirl / blowjob / missionary, maybe it's a kissing booth opening scene or something to make it short. And saying things like: "I can't wait to kiss him", "Hey, please don't cut in the line! I came here first!", etc.
More Variety / Key Things For Better Harem Scenes:
(That needs to be EMPHASIZE even further)
Although, I mentioned some of the things here already. And these are most likely going happen in part 2 (hopefully), specifically their positions. But I'm mainly talking about part 1, and because these are such good points, I'm going to include these here in the final section. 👇
g2kbuffetboy Ditch the Non-POV intro: We want 10+ women all to ourselves!! No other guys, just ourself.
g2kbuffetboy Break the horizontal plane: Overall, 80% of the action was happening in front of the viewer. Even the stuff on the sides are still "in front". But there needs to be less % front and center, and more happening directly BESIDE the viewer. Not front and side. BESIDE. Same goes for down below and up above. Down below, need more action so when the viewer tilts his head down, he sees women all over his body. When the viewer tilts his head up, there should be breasts hanging down towards him. Especially for a sofa scenario, there could be women from behind the sofa that interact with the viewer. Imagine having their hands wrapped around the viewer's shoulders, or their faces peering from the sides of the viewer's headsets, kissing his neck or cheeks or licking his ears.
g2kbuffetboy Reverse cowgirl: I do love forward cowgirl (it is my fav position in VR), but it would have been good to have some reverse cowgirl in here too. This would open up a little more space for other women to come forward and get all up on the viewer's body and face. Also, it would just add a little more variety.
Leaning forward cowgirl is one of my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE POSITIONS, especially when there are more gorgeous (close-ups) faces to look at! But with this many ladies, definitely yes to some reverse cowgirl, for more Variety. 👆
g2kbuffetboy Lick his ears! Lick his face! Suck his nipples! Toss his salad! Juggle his balls! Cuddle next to him! Stand over him! Straddle his sides! Cuddle around him! Suffocate him with boobs! Suffocate him with ass! Grind on him everywhere! Don't let him breathe!
Since part 2 is not even out yet, It's hard to say, but looking at this pic, this should've been [in] part 1 as well. Including all the pussy close-up teasing - for more VARIETY. Then, for the next part add some other positions, like in "CzechVR - Magnificent Seven: Part 2". I guess, that's for another harem scene... But overall, that's not to say I didn't enjoyed it (except the opening scene).
I TOTALLY AGREE with my new harem brother! 👇😎
argyle43 Past attempts on other sites just never got us over the finish line, and the issues you raise here are more than compensated by the girl count alone — I still can’t believe what I’m seeing every time I step into this heavenly scene.
Besides all the things I wanted to see, I REALLY think It was truly a beautiful sight to behold!! It's just that... it could've been even better. But I'm still blown away the fact that you guys managed to get 14 women! And on top of that, it's going to be a freaking series! OH YEAH!! 15-20 sexy ladies! 😎❤😍👏👍
And to some of you, some of the things I said might sound like I'm complaining, but I just wanted to share my thoughts and to make the harem series better. So thank you very much SLR Originals' Team, I had freaking a blast! And I'm sure for the most part, all the harem fans and my brothers who watched part 1, felt like it was a DREAM COME TRUE! I certainly can't wait for part 2!! (14 hot women... I'm looking for another dream fapping session!) 👏🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤👍
Oh, my... FUUUUUU! Let's go, boys! We need more harem updates! ASAP! Give us more, please!!