g2kbuffetboy Figured I will add onto my previous feedback, now that I've watched Part 2.
Overall, all my same pros and cons still apply to Part 2.
- Pros: Everything was clear, things weren't chaotic, casting was top notch (all the women match aesthetically). Additionally, when the cowgirl started up again, it started very strong. The actresses were swarming the guy a lot, there was good vibe, plenty of smiles. There were some moments were 3-4 women were licking his body at once, or putting their faces up close(ish) to the camera. This is most notable during Victoria's reverse cowgirl section. Things were pretty good during Taylee's cowgirl section too. Lots of forward leaning from all parties.
However, midway through the scene, you can start seeing the energy dwindling. This is unfortunate because if things had kept up like they did in the beginning, it would have been amazing.
Other than that, a few other things worth mentioning:
Camera position too high: It had a bit of a floating head experience. And this is unfortunate, because the "face-sitting" section could have much better if the camera position was low, like it usually is during laying down POV. Moreover, all the nipple licking was awesome (and sorely missing in Part 1), but because of the camera position, it didn't really enhance the experience as it should. All the body licking didn't feel like they were actually licking my body. My only guess the decision to put the camera higher up than normal is to try and have a bigger vantage point to see all the women? If that is the case, the intentions were good, but I don't believe the right call.
Each performer needs to command attention: As mentioned, the energy started out great, but then started to dwindle midway through. They need to remain cock-hungry. I know this is not easy, but each performer needs to think of the scene as if it's only her and the stunt cock in that room. They each need to command attention from the viewer. They need to do more than just stare at the lens. They need to crawl all over him, they need to whisper into his ear, they need to attack him from all sides and above. Give them more purpose instead of them just waiting for their turn.
Don't worry about everyone being in view all the time: Let's face it, in a real life harem situation, the guy is never going to be able to see all 15 women all at once. And that's okay. The women need to get all up in his face, at all times. They need to absolutely suffocate him:
Sea of ass. Sea of boobs, Sea of lips. Sea of tongues. Sea of pussy. We need to drown in all of it. Not just take sips of a few at a time. DROWN.
Anyways, I know a VR harem scene that comes all together in every way is near impossible. And, believe me, no matter my criticisms, I'm still so so so happy with Parts 1 and 2, and even more so that SLR is doing a harem series. And all things considered, this being only the first scene... heck man, y'all really out-did yourselves. It really is such an incredible start to this series. So kudos to SLR and the director, and crew, and everyone involved in making this happen. Please keep going strong and continue the momentum for Episode 2. We harem fans are counting on you!!!
