Getting all set for SLR Harem series

Philip

Can't give you a scene, but I can give you a trailer http://s3.sexlikereal.com/files/24729/20508_SLR_PS4_Preview.mp4

LordCrash

I'm a bit worried though, are the girls in the background always just sitting there and watching? I would have expected d that they'd spoil each other in the background with intense lesbian action and a lot of kissing, licking, fingering each other while you fuck them, one after the other. I mean, that you have the full attention of all 14 girls is pretty cool but it's kind of creepy to just have them all looking at you all the time. It also kills of the vibe if there is more or less just two people having sex and fun in the room, that's not how such a scene is imho supposed to be...

Maybe it's just me, but that's why I suggested the 270° vision so that the girls can spread to the sides and not everybody needs to be positioned kind of behind the girl that is fucked right now. In my dream harem scenario you e.g. have like 3 girls spoiling you in the foreground, some girls spoiling each other in the background and another few girls spoiling each other to the right and the left of you so that you can look around and always see sexy action. I hope that something like this will be made in the future, maybe with another entry in harem series. But my comment is of course only based on the stuff I've seen in the trailer and preview pics. 😉

midorijin

Philip Damn, I was scared at first, the video doesn't start in POV, I thought the whole video was like that, but no. Phew

argyle43

LordCrash In my dream harem scenario you e.g. have like 3 girls spoiling you in the foreground, some girls spoiling each other in the background and another few girls spoiling each other to the right and the left of you so that you can look around and always see sexy action.

Respectfully I understand what you’re saying, but that’s not a harem, it’s an orgy where you happen to be the only guy. Different thing entirely. A harem means all the girls want to be the next one fucking you, which is why they’re all trying to get and keep your eye contact. You’re Eddie Van Halen and just walked into your dressing room backstage after your best performance and two dozen girls cherry picked from the audience are desperate to be the first one you dip into. So yes I agree it’s pretty stupid if most of them are sitting off in the distance bored and just looking at you. It would be far better if they’re swarming around you. They may start kissing each other while they’re trying to kiss you, but they keep eye contact hoping you notice the show they’re putting on, all the while hoping you pick them to fuck next. That’s my dream harem.

I’m all for that orgy scenario too btw. Nothing wrong with pretty girls getting into each other 😛

Philip

There is gonna be 2 parts as far as I know

dbrandrp

Late to this but remember when Bruce Wayne basically bought a ballet troupe and took them on his yacht? What would he (or just a billionaire) do with them in this context? hmmm. lots of tights, oils, etc.

Philip

dbrandrp What would he (or just a billionaire) do with them in this context?

Ignore them, jump from the boat and get Lao back into Gordon's jurisdiction?

dbrandrp

Philip lol, yeah he always was an idiot.

LordCrash

argyle43 Different thing entirely.

Not really. Nowhere did I say that the girls shouldn't wait and shouldn't be excited for being selected to fuck you, one after the other. The girls shouldn't stay in the background all the time, just being there for the visuals (I guess that's what planned for the partnership with Party Hardcore though). But as you said, I do think the girls should somewhat be "occupied" while waiting. In the trailer it looks like they're just sitting there doing pretty much nothing which is imho kind of awkward. I want a "natural" scenario in which there is real action and energy and everything. The girls should be in the vibe and be excited. This is way too tame for what I envision a perfect harem scene.

But sure, no scene will please everyone. Some might like this approach, I just voice my take on it. And whether you call it harem or orgy doesn't matter at all, that's just words. In the end, it's a scene with one guy (you) and a whole bunch of girls. That's the bottom line, everything else is just playing to different kinks and expectations.

argyle43

LordCrash looks like they're just sitting there doing pretty much nothing which is imho kind of awkward

agreed. I really hope this isn’t the case throughout this shoot, but am suspecting it’s what we’ll see. Several JAV 2D and 3D shoots have captured what I consider to be perfect harem scenarios. If it weren’t for their stupid censorship I’d be fine and dandy and probably never need a Western studio to try to get Western girls to do the same. Anyway I can see from the trailer this shoot probably isn’t going to be it so I’ll just keep hoping that one of these days the right director and cast come together to bottle some lightning.

doublevr

My bad guys. It’s scheduled for Saturday. Have to confirm things with like 10 people these days ¯_(ツ)_/¯

hhigh88

doublevr damn that is going to be an epic Saturday then. Have to take some time off haha

g2kbuffetboy

doublevr I shall save my load for one more day =))

g2kbuffetboy

THE PREVIEW PIC IS UP!!!

hhigh88

Just watched it and the cast is absolutely amazing 👏

2 points of improvement:
1) More positions (primarily cowgirl now)
2) If the guy is lying on the floor you could do more with the 200° view. Girls could stand above him, besides him, etc. There is limited action at the same time now whereas there are enough girls around 😉

argyle43

I put up initial feedback which I’m taking down for the moment. Having gotten past the first twenty minutes which I personally had some problems with, now that Jenny has kicked off the cowgirl, this has gotten very fun indeed. What a feast of beauty here before me. So many beautiful women 🥰 Best I save the constructive criticism I have for a bit later once some other discussion has happened… once again, @doublevr and team, thank you for making this happen!!

g2kbuffetboy

Going to leave my full review of Part 1 tomorrow (Sunday), but wanted to mention two things:

1) Wow, already a script?! That's impressive. @RealcumberScripts must have worked overtime on this one!
2) When will Part 2 release? I feel like I need to see the whole scene before I can really have final thoughts on it.

Thank you SLR. What a huge day!

TimTeblow

FreyaSLR @FreyaSLR would love to know which one of the beautiful girls is doing the blowjob in this break time photo. With an attitude like that she would move to the top of the rankings.

g2kbuffetboy

Okay, after watching the whole thing through, here are my comments for PART 1 (only).

The "Good"

Great cast: Probably one of the more difficult things to nail down for a group of this size, but you did. Just wonderful cast of gorgeous (mostly Czech) women, with similar natural looks and styles.
Controlled: This was one of my initial concerns, that big group scenes can get too rowdy and chaotic. In this scene, there was no yelling, excessive laughing, or idle chatter (like I've seen in other group scenes), which usually just kills the mood. This scene had a solid sensual tone throughout. Great job.
Fantastic cowgirl: Some really great moments of cowgirl here, which is perfect for interactive scripts, and it was executed well. Good passionate performances. Some really didn't want to get off! Props to Nick for being able to power through all of that!
Nice views: It took some time to get more people in view (during cowgirl), but in the last 20-30 mins of the scene, it was a beautiful panoramic vista of sexy women filling up the central-horizontal FOV. But more on this later...
Clean tech: Everything looked clear and crisp, lighting was great, good directional audio, all the stuff that we expect from SLRO in this regard was good. Also, having 200 fisheye for this harem scene is definitely a big plus.
Assistant director: As in Zuzu. Not sure if she was specifically tasked with being the on-screen director, but she was 100% necessary as she helped guide the others what to do. Ex: She tried to get certain groups suck the stunt cock together (the blondes, the raven-hairs). She tried to get other women to lick the viewer's nipples during cowgirl (personal favorite). She even told some women to come out from being behind so that the cameras could see them. She was one of the few that actually whispered into the viewer's ears, and actually spoke to the POV. Perhaps not a lot of the women are as confident with their English skills as Zuzu, but that extra connection that Zuzu did was really good.

The "Needs Improvement"

More interaction with the viewer: This was definitely lacking. Let's do the math. A dude has 1 cock, 2 balls, 2 sides, 2 ears, 2 nipples, 2 cheeks, 1 mouth, 1 neck. There were 14 women in this scene, but in the majority of the scene they only focused on the cock. There were a handful of brief moments of dirty talk into the ears. Probably about a minute of male nipple licking (and I get a sense there was more as soon as it switched to seated POV but the editors edited it out? That's a bummer...) But aside from that... there wasn't much physical contact (or simulated contact) between the women and the viewer. And this is what DRASTICALLY needs to improve. Kiss the viewer! Lick his ears! Lick his face! Suck his nipples! Toss his salad! Juggle his balls! Cuddle next to him! Stand over him! Straddle his sides! Cuddle around him! Suffocate him with boobs! Suffocate him with ass! Grind on him everywhere! Don't let him breathe!
Break the horizontal plane: Overall, 80% of the action was happening in front of the viewer. Even the stuff on the sides are still "in front". But there needs to be less % front and center, and more happening directly BESIDE the viewer. Not front and side. BESIDE. Same goes for down below and up above. Down below, need more action so when the viewer tilts his head down, he sees women all over his body. When the viewer tilts his head up, there should be breasts hanging down towards him. Especially for a sofa scenario, there could be women from behind the sofa that interact with the viewer. Imagine having their hands wrapped around the viewer's shoulders, or their faces peering from the sides of the viewer's headsets, kissing his neck or cheeks or licking his ears. There could be so much more happening all around the viewer, instead of just in front. I would love to see more creativity with this in future episodes.

Minor "Suggestions"

Legs-down cowgirl: With these big group scenes, it may be better to have the women do legs-down cowgirl, instead of squatting cowgirl. With those squatting cowgirl, it takes up a lot of visual real estate, and also prevents other women from getting close to the viewer. Legs-down is less obtrusive.
Reverse cowgirl: I do love forward cowgirl (it is my fav position in VR), but it would have been good to have some reverse cowgirl in here too. This would open up a little more space for other women to come forward and get all up on the viewer's body and face. Also, it would just add a little more variety.
Ditch the Non-POV intro: Hear me out. I don't mind non-POV VR scenes. And this is not an argument about other dicks in VR (it's not about that). However, let's be logical here with regard to a harem scenario. I would venture that most harem fans are a bit on the greedy selfish side (guilty as charged). We want 10+ women all to ourselves!! No other guys, just ourself. So you can imagine, to have this scene start out with non-POV in VR, it's basically us looking at some other dude, getting surrounded and teased by all 14 women, while we sit here and watch. Some of the women even turn to the camera and acknowledge the viewer, making it almost like a cuckold scene. "Well just skip the first 10 mins" The thing about that is... the first 10 mins would have been amazing in POV. This is the TEASE section. When all of them are undressing around him, giving him those eyes and smiles, all that anticipation and seduction. It is all lost if we don't have that part in POV. That's a huge deal when it comes to VR: that build up.
Have carpet: Haha, this sounds dumb, but during the BJ section, they are all on their knees on hardwood. With so many women, being so careful about putting their knees on a pillow, and all of them unable to easily come forward to the viewer, it adds sort of an obstacle that could be avoided.

All in all, I think it's an incredible scene (so far), and just a phenomenal way to start off this SLR Harem series. Yes, I do have some appetite that is not quite filled, as seen in my "Needs Improvement" section, but maybe some of it will be satisfied in Part 2! And even if they aren't, I can already say with 100% honesty that this harem scene is better than most. So I like how things are shaping up =))))).

Thank you to all the hard work for getting this done, to SLR, the crew, the director, and of course the performers. Dream come true for us harem fans! @doublevr @Philip @FreyaSLR

doublevr

g2kbuffetboy that's just awesome. Read it with excitement 👍

Definitely going to address these issues in future scenes. Otherwise it's really hard to manage these things for such a big shoot.

Can't wait for US production.

argyle43

g2kbuffetboy wow, what a thorough and completely on point review!! Thank you for putting into details exactly what I’m thinking as a multi-girl junkie. I didn’t think we’d ever get more than six western lovelies into a scene without there being issues. Past attempts on other sites just never got us over the finish line, and the issues you raise here are more than compensated by the girl count alone — I still can’t believe what I’m seeing every time I step into this heavenly scene. Absolutely thrilled @doublevr you have read this through and will factor in the feedback in upcoming installments. I’m over the moon you’ll look into US talent as well. My dream of seeing ten or twelve young hotties as a cheerleader team, or in Alpha Pi sorority, or all in tanks, tees, cotton panties, and jammies having girly fun at the slumber party may actually just get realized. 🥳🎉 thank you so much for allowing us to live the dream in VR as often as you all do. SLR is quickly becoming king of VR on every front!!

n4meless8

g2kbuffetboy Okay, after watching the whole thing through, here are my comments for PART 1 (only).

What an amazing review and feedback as always, brotha! Perfect! Everything is on point! These are the things we really need to see to make the future harem scenes better!!👆 😎👍

But, as a fellow harem fan, I would like to add some of my thoughts.

Take Your Pick: Part 1 (Review / Suggestions)

@Philip @FreyaSLR @doublevr

Firstly, I want to start with three negative points. You know me, I'm not trying to offend anybody here. And I was so excited for the opening teasing scene. But, if I'm going to be completely honest, I didn't really like how it felt like I was watching a voyeur scene. (Which is not a problem in other videos if you're into that stuff, but this shouldn't exist in a harem scene.) And dude... this particular scene made me confused and killed my raging hyped boner... especially when some of the girls looked at the camera, It was almost like a cuckolding scene.... (In my opinion, the whole point of harem, is that "we" are the center of attention. And that should always be the case.)

This teasing scene should've been shot in our POV, and also could've been an insanely immersive scene...👇😢

(This might just be me, but I was imagining that some of the girls rotates around us in POV style, because I want to see all 14 girls' pretty faces.) 👆

Secondly, during the cowgirl scene, It felt like the girls in the background were just watching the entire video, even though that wasn't really the case.

And thirdly, I think the girls should've been a lot closer. And so, I edited this photo and rearranged their positions (I hope you guys don't mind). With a little bit of your imagination, I promise this will make sense... And I'm sure there are numerous options, but I'll just show you this and say something for each "numbers". 😝

Just keep in mind that I wrote these for similar harem scenes in the future as well. And before you guys read any further, I encourage you to open a separate window, or make sure to have another screen for this photo, so it won't confuse you that much. XD (Sorry in advance...) 🤣

Here are some things that I wished I saw / More Interaction for the next harem scenes later in the future:

1. I was hoping that each / most girls leaned forward during cowgirl for a 30secs or a minute or so... (And I know this scene is really crowded, but still I want to see their pretty faces really close.) And this shouldn't be a problem, especially if we the don't count the voyeur scene.
2-3. Standing behind Jenny, and right below Nick's legs (left and right). Maybe even playing with her tits or kissing her cheeks / lips.
4-5. Kneeling. Caressing Jenny's hip / legs. (Waiting for their turn while giving us eye-contact - This goes for all the girls.)
6-7. They could either be touching "our" stomach while lying down / sitting, or kneeling next to 4-5. Now, 6 could also start kissing with 4 (same thing with 7 and 5).
8-9. Lying down. Kissing the guy's chest or licking his nipples. <~ (A lot VR studios are actually starting to do include this.) But also, It would've been nice if they talk dirty and whisper lots of dirty things... Additionally, 8 could've make out with 6 (same thing with 9 and 7), but if you do this for future harem scenes, it would be nice if it's not "mirrored"; meaning, one girl should be whispering, while the other two girls are kissing on the other side. Plus, from time to time, it would be hot if both girls kiss our cheeks / lips. (And to add more variety, 8-9 could start kissing each other right before another girl starts riding.)
10-11. Standing with their legs spread and playing with their pussies. Or, move backwards to kiss 12-13. Also, both girls could move behind the camera and whispers close to our ears while 8-9 are doing their jobs.
12-13. Same thing above. Or alternatively, let 12-13 move forward to kiss 10-11 and play with each other. (This might be difficult due to not enough space, but it's an option.)
14. She can pretty much do whatever she wants and move around freely. She could kiss and just have a good time with 1-2, 10-11 and 12-13. Or better yet, she could move behind the camera for a little bit and starts talking dirty, while 8-9 are kissing our chest or something. (For the most part, 14 could've been Zuzu, since she was pretty much telling the girls what to do.)
4-5 & 14 / 1 & 2-3 / 2-3 & 14 (Any combination really... ) Give us more triple team blowjob. (Three girls at the same! Yes, please!!) Play with the balls. Handjob with 2 or 3 girls. Even if it's just for a few seconds, make it wetter for the next girl! You get the idea...

(Looking at some of BTS pics here again, some of these would probably in part 2.)

Rotation / Staying active:

But the important part here (for me), is that 8-9 (and 1 obviously) should rotates / change, especially when there are 14 girls. Alternatively, when you change the 8-9, 6-7 should take 8-9's jobs. Then, at the same time 4-5 move forward, and so on and so forth. But this doesn't mean you shouldn't mix it up or add more variety. In other words, their roles are constantly changing.
When it comes to rotation, I would prefer two or three new girls each time for standing blowjob (please do more seated blowjob). But I understand that this is most likely intentional, because of the the title - "Take Your Pick".
Three girls giving us blowjob, while the rest are kissing (well, not all of them at same) and making eye contact to the viewer.
During the standing blowjob scene, It would've been better if there was one or two girls standing besides us. Again, kissing our chest / nipples, POV Kisses, dirty talk, whisper, etc. (Preferably rotate this as well in the future.) Especially in this scene, some of the girls were kneeling down without any pillow...
And without any pillows, there should be more girls standing during the standing blowjob scene. I mean, This might just be me, but with 14 girls, there should be at least one girl standing behind the camera or beside the viewer, for dirty talking and giving a handjob (you'll see this on CzechVR).

I hope everything made sense so far... (are you still with me? 😝) The point is, the girls should be a lot closer and a lot active when it comes to pleasing us, rather than just giving us eye-contact during the cowgirl scene, especially the girls that are closer to us.

Or, something like this. (More on this specific JAV VR video later...) 😉

Engaging The Viewer More / Be More Vocal: Examples for the future harem scene(s) 🤤

Zuzu: Time's up. Next girl, please. / Who wants to go next?
Cowgirl: Please let me ride more!
Other girls: (raises their arms)
Other girls that are closer to us: After her, please let me do it next...
(Of course, it doesn't have to be loud / aggressive.) But speaking of loud... Once again, since we are talking about harem, I'm linking the multi episode thread for a harem "Catfight" scene. In this case, the louder and aggressive, the better!! But whispers are acceptable as well. (Although, to me, "Catfight" are still hot regardless of how many girl there are in front of me, and whether it's a harem or just a regular threesome scene, or how loud they are. They just need to aggressively fight over "our" attention. That's the I'mportant part!) 👈

Before I move on to the next thing...

Remember what Melody Marks said during her interview? "I AM THEIR QUEEN.", "I want all the attention.", "I want all the hands on me all the time.", "I want all the lips on me all the time." <~ These, but with girls. Basically (at least 7-10 girls), I really wanted them to be really close to the viewer and active at the same. (And change the Queen into King.) 😉

(And you know what? FROM A MALE PERSPECTIVE, what Melody said are also really good reasons to not do non-POV / voyeur opening teasing scenes, especially for harem.) We all want the attention, right, my harem brothers?! 🔥👈🙏🏼

Also, If you guys included more whispers, dirty talk, and use their numbers and the surroundings / 3d space to your advantage, I would be able to feel their touch with just the sound of their voice:
Ok, so what do I mean by these? Some of the girls during certain parts of the cowgirl scene, wasn't really doing anything other than watching or chatting. The idea is that (at least in my dreams)14 girls surrounding one guy, and all of them are trying their hardest to give us the best pleasure experience. 👈

Languages:

Honestly, the language barrier shouldn't be an excuse at all. And the girls who are confident with their English could've just translate some of the lines that are closer to us - "She wants your cock". It doesn't have to be an exact translation. But really, speak in English even if it's basic only. And besides (I don't know about you), but languages are sexy anyways, especially during sex. So even without a single translation, it's perfectly fine! 😍

Plus, since we wouldn't be able to feel their touch; whispering, ASMR and all the sound elements should always come into play, alongside with all the action and visuals. (this includes for every VR scenes). And if you read some of my reviews before, you know that I mentioned how it important it is to increase the illusion and immersion for the viewer.

Closer / Far away:

Some of you might remember that I talked about this pic in 2020 (originally, I only showed one picture) but I'm going to talk about it again, even though this is somewhat off topic - The reason why I'm mentioning this again, and I know I said that the girls needs to be closer (this is obviously an exception), but girls waiting for their turn is so hot to me. (I hope I'm not the only one)...

HNVR-007
For a future harem scene (whether it's Czech, Japanese, American, or any Ethnicity really), It would make me really happy if you guys do one of these exactly... 🙏🏼

(But I know it's probably just me... So I have more suggestions):
They can line up as a group of 2 / 3 girls out of 15-20 girls for seated blowjob. 1-2 minutes for each groups.
Or Alternatively, instead of seated cowgirl / blowjob / missionary, maybe it's a kissing booth opening scene or something to make it short. And saying things like: "I can't wait to kiss him", "Hey, please don't cut in the line! I came here first!", etc.

EDIT:

More Variety / Key Things For Better Harem Scenes:

(That needs to be EMPHASIZE even further)

Although, I mentioned some of the things here already. And these are most likely going happen in part 2 (hopefully), specifically their positions. But I'm mainly talking about part 1, and because these are such good points, I'm going to include these here in the final section. 👇

g2kbuffetboy Ditch the Non-POV intro: We want 10+ women all to ourselves!! No other guys, just ourself.

g2kbuffetboy Break the horizontal plane: Overall, 80% of the action was happening in front of the viewer. Even the stuff on the sides are still "in front". But there needs to be less % front and center, and more happening directly BESIDE the viewer. Not front and side. BESIDE. Same goes for down below and up above. Down below, need more action so when the viewer tilts his head down, he sees women all over his body. When the viewer tilts his head up, there should be breasts hanging down towards him. Especially for a sofa scenario, there could be women from behind the sofa that interact with the viewer. Imagine having their hands wrapped around the viewer's shoulders, or their faces peering from the sides of the viewer's headsets, kissing his neck or cheeks or licking his ears.

g2kbuffetboy Reverse cowgirl: I do love forward cowgirl (it is my fav position in VR), but it would have been good to have some reverse cowgirl in here too. This would open up a little more space for other women to come forward and get all up on the viewer's body and face. Also, it would just add a little more variety.

Leaning forward cowgirl is one of my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE POSITIONS, especially when there are more gorgeous (close-ups) faces to look at! But with this many ladies, definitely yes to some reverse cowgirl, for more Variety. 👆

g2kbuffetboy Lick his ears! Lick his face! Suck his nipples! Toss his salad! Juggle his balls! Cuddle next to him! Stand over him! Straddle his sides! Cuddle around him! Suffocate him with boobs! Suffocate him with ass! Grind on him everywhere! Don't let him breathe!

And finally...

Since part 2 is not even out yet, It's hard to say, but looking at this pic, this should've been [in] part 1 as well. Including all the pussy close-up teasing - for more VARIETY. Then, for the next part add some other positions, like in "CzechVR - Magnificent Seven: Part 2". I guess, that's for another harem scene... But overall, that's not to say I didn't enjoyed it (except the opening scene).

I TOTALLY AGREE with my new harem brother! 👇😎

argyle43 Past attempts on other sites just never got us over the finish line, and the issues you raise here are more than compensated by the girl count alone — I still can’t believe what I’m seeing every time I step into this heavenly scene.

Besides all the things I wanted to see, I REALLY think It was truly a beautiful sight to behold!! It's just that... it could've been even better. But I'm still blown away the fact that you guys managed to get 14 women! And on top of that, it's going to be a freaking series! OH YEAH!! 15-20 sexy ladies! 😎❤😍👏👍

And to some of you, some of the things I said might sound like I'm complaining, but I just wanted to share my thoughts and to make the harem series better. So thank you very much SLR Originals' Team, I had freaking a blast! And I'm sure for the most part, all the harem fans and my brothers who watched part 1, felt like it was a DREAM COME TRUE! I certainly can't wait for part 2!! (14 hot women... I'm looking for another dream fapping session!) 👏🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤👍

doublevr Can't wait for US production.

Oh, my... FUUUUUU! Let's go, boys! We need more harem updates! ASAP! Give us more, please!!
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

g2kbuffetboy

g2kbuffetboy Figured I will add onto my previous feedback, now that I've watched Part 2.

Overall, all my same pros and cons still apply to Part 2.

Pros: Everything was clear, things weren't chaotic, casting was top notch (all the women match aesthetically). Additionally, when the cowgirl started up again, it started very strong. The actresses were swarming the guy a lot, there was good vibe, plenty of smiles. There were some moments were 3-4 women were licking his body at once, or putting their faces up close(ish) to the camera. This is most notable during Victoria's reverse cowgirl section. Things were pretty good during Taylee's cowgirl section too. Lots of forward leaning from all parties.

However, midway through the scene, you can start seeing the energy dwindling. This is unfortunate because if things had kept up like they did in the beginning, it would have been amazing.

Other than that, a few other things worth mentioning:

Camera position too high: It had a bit of a floating head experience. And this is unfortunate, because the "face-sitting" section could have much better if the camera position was low, like it usually is during laying down POV. Moreover, all the nipple licking was awesome (and sorely missing in Part 1), but because of the camera position, it didn't really enhance the experience as it should. All the body licking didn't feel like they were actually licking my body. My only guess the decision to put the camera higher up than normal is to try and have a bigger vantage point to see all the women? If that is the case, the intentions were good, but I don't believe the right call.
Each performer needs to command attention: As mentioned, the energy started out great, but then started to dwindle midway through. They need to remain cock-hungry. I know this is not easy, but each performer needs to think of the scene as if it's only her and the stunt cock in that room. They each need to command attention from the viewer. They need to do more than just stare at the lens. They need to crawl all over him, they need to whisper into his ear, they need to attack him from all sides and above. Give them more purpose instead of them just waiting for their turn.
Don't worry about everyone being in view all the time: Let's face it, in a real life harem situation, the guy is never going to be able to see all 15 women all at once. And that's okay. The women need to get all up in his face, at all times. They need to absolutely suffocate him:

Sea of ass. Sea of boobs, Sea of lips. Sea of tongues. Sea of pussy. We need to drown in all of it. Not just take sips of a few at a time. DROWN.

Anyways, I know a VR harem scene that comes all together in every way is near impossible. And, believe me, no matter my criticisms, I'm still so so so happy with Parts 1 and 2, and even more so that SLR is doing a harem series. And all things considered, this being only the first scene... heck man, y'all really out-did yourselves. It really is such an incredible start to this series. So kudos to SLR and the director, and crew, and everyone involved in making this happen. Please keep going strong and continue the momentum for Episode 2. We harem fans are counting on you!!!

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