I agree. Normally I dont care about plot, because they are almost 100% crap and feels so fake. This time I watched the whole 5 min beginning. I even watched it twice to make proper comment here. Storyline 10/10, little bit technical problems (some objects and caracters had blurry/warped edges when in motion. Especially timestamp 3:50 when man walked in the room. What causes that?) but otherwise better than great beginning.
This is definitely your best movie so far. Could be better. Some do not like if I say this but I think you could be way better than Alex Nash because of two things. 1. You listen and hear people and want to improve. You are humble. 2. You don't have the history burden, you have not made hundreds of VR porn videos. You have not been fed up and do the next video same way as hundred of previous ones and think that is the only best way to do it.
There is none that bullshit foot fetish in your videos where feet are center, stuffed into my mouth and blocking the view completely. No odd kissing laying in weird position in the bed and armpit fetish either (like in Nash videos). Your video was also really simple. No dozen different positions which change every two minutes. You have vision you want.
Some improvements and what to test. The 69 position in 22-24 minutes do not work. How viewer is able to be in that position and have VR glasses still on. Good to try but no. Never again.
Where was all the kissing and intimacy? Please try this missionary position. It is one reason it makes VRLatina films so good. https://www.sexlikereal.com/scenes/sunny-side-up-48282?t=1885
Intimacy is the key and you can't have enough of it. Make it simple and slow. I am so confused why this is not properly executed and understood? Here is 6 years old scene. It is still one of the best films about intimacy and eye contact. Pure gold from the start to the end (18 minutes long). It is not shame to copy from the best. It is stupid not to. https://www.sexlikereal.com/scenes/perfection-up-close-8274
Let's praise also Japanese porn and their intimacy. I know films are usually too long and crappy quality. Do not get fooled by that. Properly done (and cut by BYOJ and using passthrough AI) they are pure heroine. I will give you an example and timestap. Inimate kissing https://www.sexlikereal.com/scenes/kana-morisawa-female-company-president-is-a-sexy-slobbering-sex-freak-36321?t=1526 . So natural and real. No Alex Nash weird kissing.
Same film there is reverse cowgirl, which only Japanese do and it is done really good. Could it be more intimate than woman in your lap and you see all her beauty and shapes? https://www.sexlikereal.com/scenes/kana-morisawa-female-company-president-is-a-sexy-slobbering-sex-freak-36321?t=4437
I hope you understood what I really ment by intimacy watching those 4 film examples. Feel free to execute and be VR porn George Lucas 🙂