Ok, I just watched the scene. Overall I liked it. It's my kind of scenario. She is a good actress, and hot. I liked the slow build.
A couple of questions.
Why does the scene description not match what is in the scene? The description says that it is your girlfriend that you are Rekindled Desire with her. The actual story in the scene is that you have never seen her naked before. She's a crush. Both are good stories. But I start with what I read and then slowly start to change in my mind who she is to me.
This happens a lot BTW
The changing of the camera in the middle of a position is not a good thing but I can deal with it. (It must suck with PT). The bigger thing I think is that the camera is not level to the ground. It makes the image weird. It's a lot harder to get the picture back to the upright position.
You should have a little bubble level taped to the top of the camera. They are really small. All you have to do is look and see if it is straight up and down.
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