alexnash
I think your films are fantastic on the whole. In fact, they are the main reason I keep returning to SLR.
There is one area though that requires work, and this applies to most of what I see on SLR...
The films jump immediately into the sex without any foreplay. For example, it's hard to describe this film as anything but a disaster or lost opportunity. The model is gorgeous. She's dressed as a stripper. There is no dancing or stripping whatsoever. Judging by the mosaic, because I don't intend to re-download it, the action starts in under two minutes...
https://www.sexlikereal.com/virtualreality/mosaic/id/33007
JAV films begin with at least five minutes of groping and foreplay in most situations. The foreplay and awkward groping helps to develop a rapport between the actors that should be visible to the viewers. It even helps substitute for a plot where the dialogue can't be strong, such as where an actress may be a little inexperienced.
Please, alexnash, add some groping for those of us from the JAV universe interloping to check out the world of American porn!