I feel like some of the reactions to that scene have been blown out of proportion. Yes, it may not have been the best scene ever, but it's certainly not the worst either especially for a first timer.
As I've mentioned before in this forum, the thing that makes SLR scenes stand out isn't just their casting or their camera quality. Other studios like CzechVR and Badoink produce similarly high-quality results. What makes SLR stand out for me is their unique 'closeup missionary' pos, it's done so well that you just can't find it elsewhere. It's honestly the main reason I stick around, even though it's a position that most directors, including those at VRFS, often avoid for some reason. And with all due respect, I don't think VRFS deserves all the praise they've been getting since they moved on.
This particular position is typically shot by Alex Nash and, on the rare occasion, by Alex Mack. Kudos to Mutiny for having the guts to tackle this position on his first try; it's disappointing to hear this will be your first and last scene. Despite the criticism, I genuinely enjoyed it as a whole.