Mutiny

I just finished a script for it.
Full disclosure, It my first (finished) commercial script.
Meaning I've scripted some parts of scenes for personal use up until now. IF needed, I'm willing to let a more seasoned scripter make a replacement.

If needed 😉
It's a truly awesome video and I really dig the music! - I don't want to ruin it with a bad script!

Mutiny Can I send send you a test version?
You can reach me at
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        Thank you so much for your work Rakly3. I'll send you an email.

            Mutiny Tested it last night, I have to correct some stuff that didn't work as I thought it would.

                @Mutiny I am late to seeing your PMV, and as a fellow video editor AND harem fan... I gotta hand it to you. THIS IS EXCELLENT WORK. Really, really, really was such a unique experience after 5+ years of VR porn watching, it's rare to get a new and fresh experience, and this was it!!

                I really hope you will continue to do more of these! I think harem scenes are perfect for this because it really almost makes it feel like we are fucking all of them at once.

                For example, I loved the way you edited the seated cowgirl section with faster cuts, as opposed to the missionary section where you let each scene breathe a bit. The latter is good too, but something about the faster cuts where every few beats there is a new woman riding on top of me... that's the money for me.

                Can't wait to see what you come up with!!! Props all around!

                  I think script is ready now (even made it crazier since the last recording I sent you Mutiny )

                  Still need test it.

                      Rakly3 That's either going to give you the best night of your life or put you in a hospital. Either way, you'll have a great story to tell!

                        Alright, version 4b - (Handy) Release candidate submitted for approval 🙂

                        Script starts at 1s 167ms and from there on it's non-stop movement until the end. Not a single "dead" spot.
                        I have a Handy, Base and reduced speed, for the different toys. Sadly our system atm only allows for one script attached to a scene ID. I think.

                        This is promising and a very good first effort. Thank you. Would love to see more! Some suggestions/requests: 1) I think something longer would be better; 2) Some of the cuts were a little abrupt and disrupting to the immersive effect--perhaps work on a way to smooth them out (dissolve in/out); 3) How about some with the same girl (of course, the more popular ones, i.e., Melody Marks, Liya Silver, Vina Sky) from her different videos?

                          mebejoe I replied over on the video as well but just wanted to say glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback!

                              5 days later

                              Bumping to let everyone know Neon Girls now has an interactive script!

                              (Also, making final tweaks to a new video that's probably not for everyone but the people who like it will love it.)

                              Mutiny

                              You know, I watched it again a couple more times and maybe some of my earlier feedback isn't spot on.

                              Maybe because I knew what to expect, the cuts were not so jarring.

                              Keep up the good work!

                                  mebejoe Thanks for saying that. It's a tricky balance between being surprising and being jarring. I'll keep trying to find it.

                                      You are not ready.

                                      (You'll want to hydrate first.)

                                        Mutiny this one won’t be my thing, but I’ve loved the two you’ve created so far. So much potential in this space. Best of moments from singular scenes. Best of moments from multiple scenes. I used to love pulling down titty drop PMVs from pornhub before that site clamped down. Something like that would be incredible. Or a compilation of dick pushing into pussy for first time set to a great soundtrack. So much goodness to draw from out there. I cannot wait to see where you guys take this idea. Thanks for sharing your skills with the rest of us !!

                                            argyle43 compilation of dick pushing into pussy for first time

                                            Now that is a GREAT idea. Might have to steal that one. 😀