Mutiny Would it be possible to add a second or two extra at the very start of the PMV's? The script pretty much kicks off within the first second. (200ms) Just some black space, or even a short countdown of 4 secs would be great!

Toys usually default to 0 when turning them on. I'm using the intro clip and sound as buffer to get the toy into the correct starting "depth".

      Rakly3 Thanks for the feedback! I can definitely make that happen.

          Mutiny

          I just finished a script for it.
          Full disclosure, It my first (finished) commercial script.
          Meaning I've scripted some parts of scenes for personal use up until now. IF needed, I'm willing to let a more seasoned scripter make a replacement.

          If needed 😉
          It's a truly awesome video and I really dig the music! - I don't want to ruin it with a bad script!

          Mutiny Can I send send you a test version?
          You can reach me at
          tony sexlikereal com

                Thank you so much for your work Rakly3. I'll send you an email.

                    Mutiny Tested it last night, I have to correct some stuff that didn't work as I thought it would.

                        @Mutiny I am late to seeing your PMV, and as a fellow video editor AND harem fan... I gotta hand it to you. THIS IS EXCELLENT WORK. Really, really, really was such a unique experience after 5+ years of VR porn watching, it's rare to get a new and fresh experience, and this was it!!

                        I really hope you will continue to do more of these! I think harem scenes are perfect for this because it really almost makes it feel like we are fucking all of them at once.

                        For example, I loved the way you edited the seated cowgirl section with faster cuts, as opposed to the missionary section where you let each scene breathe a bit. The latter is good too, but something about the faster cuts where every few beats there is a new woman riding on top of me... that's the money for me.

                        Can't wait to see what you come up with!!! Props all around!

                          I think script is ready now (even made it crazier since the last recording I sent you Mutiny )

                          Still need test it.

                              Rakly3 That's either going to give you the best night of your life or put you in a hospital. Either way, you'll have a great story to tell!

                                Alright, version 4b - (Handy) Release candidate submitted for approval 🙂

                                Script starts at 1s 167ms and from there on it's non-stop movement until the end. Not a single "dead" spot.
                                I have a Handy, Base and reduced speed, for the different toys. Sadly our system atm only allows for one script attached to a scene ID. I think.

                                This is promising and a very good first effort. Thank you. Would love to see more! Some suggestions/requests: 1) I think something longer would be better; 2) Some of the cuts were a little abrupt and disrupting to the immersive effect--perhaps work on a way to smooth them out (dissolve in/out); 3) How about some with the same girl (of course, the more popular ones, i.e., Melody Marks, Liya Silver, Vina Sky) from her different videos?

                                  mebejoe I replied over on the video as well but just wanted to say glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback!

                                      5 days later

                                      Bumping to let everyone know Neon Girls now has an interactive script!

                                      (Also, making final tweaks to a new video that's probably not for everyone but the people who like it will love it.)

                                      Mutiny

                                      You know, I watched it again a couple more times and maybe some of my earlier feedback isn't spot on.

                                      Maybe because I knew what to expect, the cuts were not so jarring.

                                      Keep up the good work!