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I watched your first video on SLR.
Overall I think you are on the right track.
I really liked the plot. The idea of my stepmom needing to drain my balls 3 times a day is what I am talking about. The dirty talk was great. I also didn't mind the room it was in. I saw someone say they didn't like it but I thought it felt like a real guys bedroom. That's all I'm looking for is realisticness.
There is one thing that completely killed the scene for me. I would try to not pay attention to it but it's right in front of me. It's the mean place I normally look. Even if I'm not looking at it it still is brought up by the girls over and over.
I'm sure you have a different opinion but GIANT cocks are a fetish. If it was big, ok I could deal with it. I do all the time watching VR porn. But this thing became the whole point of the story. They can't get it more that a 1/3 in their mouths. They cant stop talking about it. It won't fit in pornstars without breaking and bending.
Huge cocks are a fetish just like armpits. Some like it and some don't. The difference is that the armpit thing is for a minute or two. The giant cock you can't skip past it. You either like it or just skip the scene altogether. My unscientific viewpoint is that some will like it but more people want to pretend the stunt cock is them. And unless you are in the 1% of cocks then this thing pulls everybody out of immersion.
Do you plan to have this giant cock in all your scenes? Is this your thing you want to be your style? I liked almost everything else. I feel you will fix the angles. And if the plots are about the same perverse ideas then I will like that too.