xeddin1
I like the scenario so far.
It would be great if the stepmom shows some hesitation where she directs the lesson but doesn’t engage in the act right away to build up the tension.

Also I’ve seen many scenes on SLR like from VRSpy and some SLR Originals where they establish the step relationship at the beginning but then drop the step during dirty talk mid scene. It makes the dirty talk much more natural.
Using endearing terms like honey or darling also adds to it.

Anyways appreciate you taking our feedback.

      zozman92
      There is no hesitation in terms of 'oh doing this is so taboo'. But rather there is about 5 minutes of her having a casual conversation on the phone with her friend talking about her day and how she's going to fuck her stepsons brains out - all in a very casual tone. This escalates to her jerking him off and mentioning how fun it would be to have a get together with all her friends to gangbang him. Something like that.

      If this comment gets 10 likes I'll post the script.

        Again, i love honesty as it gives respect on all sides regaradless of hurty feelings without being obnoxious.

        Disclaimer aside - For me at this point surely the story line is almost irrelevant. Put out a scene which is you, and your style that you believe in personally and want to film as this will make you happy as a director going forward, do what makes you feel passionate, otherwise it will ulitimately shine through if you're filming scenes you don't like yourself - I understand that sound a little 'hippy' but it's true

        Then at that point if you have something that clicks with an audience - image quality, positions, intimacy, distance, colours - If none of these are on point then you have issues and feedback will be bad regardless of story line or performer.

        Get the basics right and others things will fall into place - If the image quality is bad then i personally won't watch any scene from any studio

        I've honestly got over 100 studios blocked from my feed as they are just filler to make up numbers on a spreadsheet.

          Silly-Sausage
          Well, yes, if the sex or image quality is bad then the scene will not be good.
          Plus I am not handling the filming, lighting, or audio myself. I lucked out and have got the most experienced VR porn director to take me under their wing, with their entire crew and equipment. So, no need to fret over a first timers use of camera or lightning.

              xeddin1 Well, yes, if the sex or image quality is bad then the scene will not be good.
              Plus I am not handling the filming, lighting, or audio myself. I lucked out and have got the most experienced VR porn director to take me under their wing, with their entire crew and equipment. So, no need to fret over a first timers use of camera or lightning.

              ....well i don't want to be rude then, but what exactly is your involvement, are you just a funding source with a vision or possibly funded by SLR to create the scene ?

                  xeddin1 I lucked out and have got the most experienced VR porn director to take me under their wing,

                  Well if it's Alex Nash that has taken you under his wing then you are a very lucky guy... i'm not kiddin' when i say he will go down in history as a pioneer of what is possible in VR, other directors just don't have a clue.

                  Emulate Alex Nash and you will be star - simple as that 🙂

                  Edit: Without the armpit stuff in every scene - that's got boring and feels like a routine instead of the niche fetish that it is - Also please no feet in my face

                    xeddin1 my personal opinion - don't put TOO much stock in the feedback from this forum. Many of the regular posters here seem to love to hear the sound of their own voice, and push that voice as if it's the only one to be heard. I am a long-time regular of SLR but don't spend a lot of time in the forum because it's a lot of boring, unimaginative posts that aren't good discussion. Trust your instincts and don't be afraid to try new things or whatever is enjoyable. Don't listen to the NPCs.

                        Niteflyte
                        I think when I first made a post about making PMVs most of the response was a big fat NO. I did it anyways and now I'm on multiple sites with multiple business partners and it has lead to me making my own scenes. I appreciate greatly that there are those like you, who are realists and know that this forum represents a very small minority of the actual viewers. That being said, the response concerning my original scene scene project has been mostly positive. All the same, I will make what I want and listen to feedback I feel is useful and ignore the feed where someone has a personal agenda.

                            Please cast Darcy Diamond. I would love to see her return to VR.

                            And good luck in this endeavour. Hopefully your vision strikes a chord with the masses, so your ideas have a chance to breathe and come to life.

                            Personally I'm far less interested in the story scenario of a scene than in how good the action is. To that end, I'm after plenty of anal action - if it's good enough I'll watch it whatever the setup is. Also, ideally directors to move past the standard of doing nothing but 100% POV scenes all the time, which is incredibly boring and formulaic. What I'm really looking for is something which is a mix of both POV and other angles - so you get the benefits of POV in those angles where it really works, but can actually move the camera angle in tighter to get decent close ups on things like cumshots, instead of being forced to watch the action from miles away.

                              DaveBowman2001
                              After my first scene I plan on making one titled:
                              "Would you like Anal with that?"
                              Public fucking in a fast food joint where you get 100% off your meal if you fuck the staff in the ass

                              (Just a thought, not confirmed)

                                  xeddin1 exactly

                                  Just like in many places, anytime you are trying to something original, constructive, different, creative, etc, all the NPCs will look for a chance to shoot their poison/spread their misery (like so many bugs to the light). These are all the people (not everyone on the forum, the NPCs) who are the former teacher's pets and hall monitors, striving for a Brownie Badge for reciting the standardized trope of the day. IMHO the market needs creativity, spirit, passion, fun, etc... and just like so many successful things, there can be all kinds of naysayers, all the while the demand will speak for itself. Wishing you the best in your endeavors and will be on the lookout myself :-)

                                    xeddin1 Yes to Darcy and Sadie! I like all 3 ideas. The pornoverse one is an idea I've brought up before similar to the very well known JAV series. Not enough freeuse videos in VR. I enjoy escapism, and porn that can sometimes be ridiculous or unrealistic. Stuff done in a lot of JAV, and kinda like what Brazzers like doing sometimes. I too am tired of the same old GFE/PSE and massage scenes (with taboo stepmom scenes an exception). At least make them interesting... I want more scenes with extras, like people in the background watching or doing mundane things. I want story progression, or at least change things up significantly from shot to shot. NA's legendary Fidelio comes to mind, where you're brought to different rooms with different girls and then all of them at the end. Imagine having 9 sets with 9 girls for 9 circles of hell for your "welcome to hell" idea. Probably a very expensive video but you'd win awards for sure. VR Porn used to be more creative narratively in it's infancy many years ago.

                                      xeddin1 for the first 2 girls, personally prefer Sky Pierce and Brianna Arson. Would've gone for Darcy Diamond but heard she tattooed her eyes black so think she'd be best for a hell/demon based theme

                                      Any chance for the scenarios that lost this poll to be picked up in the future? Would be a shame as they all sound interesting especially the hell one

                                          NovaShadow

                                          We will see. I've been told that 'Demons' fall into the bestiality category.

                                            I think you should put up another poll were you have the options of what you wrote here plus a regular scene idea.
                                            I just looked at the numbers for The Circle. The regular version has less views but more hearts. I'm sure that the other version has more views because it came out first.
                                            I'm just pointing this out so that you don't fail at making SLR videos because not that many people want your idea of porn.
                                            There is already 2 sites that I know of that only make cosplay videos. Maybe you don't think of your ideas as cosplay but at least I do for anything that is fantasy.
                                            I just hope you understand that what you are proposing is going to be harder to make look good and less people want it in the first place.

                                              rerun119
                                              The circle was poorly received because most people don't want to have jump scares while watching porn and don't want to fuck a zombie either (in my view).

                                              Where do you see not many people wanting this idea? Where do you see that less people want this in the first place?