For all scenes in VR, a checklist should be:
1-clean any small boogers out of nose
2-clean any bits of toilet paper stuck to pussy
3-clean teeth
Love the armpit stuff, especially when there's stubble or even hair.
For closeups, don't have her masturbate and block my view with her hand. And don't shake around real fast because it's hard to find a non-blurry frame to pause on.
Hate when the girl looks off camera at the director or whoever, but I don't think you're guilty of that.
Some scenes are way too long, I think a recent one I came across was 2hrs, Jesus Christ! That's not really necessary, I'm not gonna watch a VR porn like I watch a regular movie.