Manny_S Manny what an amazing first foray into the PMV realm bro!
9.5 out of 10 buddy. I was getting rocked. Great transitions and scenes. Music and sound effects.
The build up was so intense and well developed sequentially.
The missionary and cumshot part was really climactic you really nailed the moment there. Love explosive cumshots.
Between eye rolling ,actress orgasming ,sound effects it was glorious.
Couple suggestions for the next one my man:
-I would hold the scenes before transitioning just a touch longer. You want a touch more impact with each actress in the mind before jumping to the next one. Just a touch because you dont want to lose the power of the switching frequently either. Im some spots especially when you down to beginning parts of the blow jobs and then the beginning part of the insertions into the girls holes.
-The zoom and angles were a bit off in some cases.
- I would add a couple more slow insertions into her hole into the mix that is such a powerful part. Also a touch of zoom in a couple when you do it , I mean live zoom.
This guy is one of the best 2D PMV guys in the business check this out for some more ideas:
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- The special effects were so well done and not overdone. I would add a bit of slow down (like gradual slow down to half speed in a couple parts in the next one too for another wild effect and then gradual speed up)
-couple more close up eye contacts too. The fade out /fade in eye contact transition at 4:47 is phenomenal. Add a couple more of those transitions ...it feels like you are traveling into one girls reality into another. Wild.
Again just an amzing job. Cant wait for a SCRIPT!
