This is promising and a very good first effort. Thank you. Would love to see more! Some suggestions/requests: 1) I think something longer would be better; 2) Some of the cuts were a little abrupt and disrupting to the immersive effect--perhaps work on a way to smooth them out (dissolve in/out); 3) How about some with the same girl (of course, the more popular ones, i.e., Melody Marks, Liya Silver, Vina Sky) from her different videos?
