This is promising and a very good first effort. Thank you. Would love to see more! Some suggestions/requests: 1) I think something longer would be better; 2) Some of the cuts were a little abrupt and disrupting to the immersive effect--perhaps work on a way to smooth them out (dissolve in/out); 3) How about some with the same girl (of course, the more popular ones, i.e., Melody Marks, Liya Silver, Vina Sky) from her different videos?

    mebejoe I replied over on the video as well but just wanted to say glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback!

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        Bumping to let everyone know Neon Girls now has an interactive script!

        (Also, making final tweaks to a new video that's probably not for everyone but the people who like it will love it.)

        Mutiny

        You know, I watched it again a couple more times and maybe some of my earlier feedback isn't spot on.

        Maybe because I knew what to expect, the cuts were not so jarring.

        Keep up the good work!

            mebejoe Thanks for saying that. It's a tricky balance between being surprising and being jarring. I'll keep trying to find it.

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                  Mutiny this one won’t be my thing, but I’ve loved the two you’ve created so far. So much potential in this space. Best of moments from singular scenes. Best of moments from multiple scenes. I used to love pulling down titty drop PMVs from pornhub before that site clamped down. Something like that would be incredible. Or a compilation of dick pushing into pussy for first time set to a great soundtrack. So much goodness to draw from out there. I cannot wait to see where you guys take this idea. Thanks for sharing your skills with the rest of us !!

                      argyle43 compilation of dick pushing into pussy for first time

                      Now that is a GREAT idea. Might have to steal that one. 😀

                        Mutiny I like the cuts and am far more in the surprise camp than the jarred camp. I can never get enough of the thrill I get e.g. in The Angel Trial scene when it suddenly cuts from the opening credits to a closeup of Jane Wild’s playful expression in closeup. It makes my heart leap every time. Your work does the same. When the beat really kicks in on Dream Team PMV and Delilah and Apryl are making out like newlyweds… fuck me. so hottt!! 🔥 🔥 🔥

                          @Mutiny your work is what the scene previews would be in a perfect world too. Oh man, I can only imagine how next level that would be. Maybe just for the super highly anticipated ones like tomorrows BGGG 🤩

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