I liked the new scene. I love the long intros.
I didn't quit understand if it was a continuation of the first scene. It didn't seem to be. The first one you were Melody's friend. So in the second one I thought Blake would have said something to bring them together but never did. I thought 'Nash Magazine' meant we were taking photos for a magazine or something. I guess it was a completely different scene with my virgin roommate that looked at magazines this time.
Was the virgin thing in the script or was that ad lib by Angel? From a get into the story kind of thing. Maybe it's just me but a girl that is going to play a virgin should do that the whole scene or it feels really forced when 5 minutes later she is riding and talking like she has done it 500 times.
The other thing I didn't understand was why the 3072 camera?
You have shot Blake in 3 different scenes with 3 different camera in the last couple of weeks.
One with the 8K camera
One with the 3072 camera
One with the SLR camera.
For me the SLR camera still looks the best for color, crisp picture, and scale. The SLR camera wins all 3.