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alexnash

I think your films are fantastic on the whole. In fact, they are the main reason I keep returning to SLR.

There is one area though that requires work, and this applies to most of what I see on SLR...

The films jump immediately into the sex without any foreplay. For example, it's hard to describe this film as anything but a disaster or lost opportunity. The model is gorgeous. She's dressed as a stripper. There is no dancing or stripping whatsoever. Judging by the mosaic, because I don't intend to re-download it, the action starts in under two minutes...

https://www.sexlikereal.com/virtualreality/mosaic/id/33007

JAV films begin with at least five minutes of groping and foreplay in most situations. The foreplay and awkward groping helps to develop a rapport between the actors that should be visible to the viewers. It even helps substitute for a plot where the dialogue can't be strong, such as where an actress may be a little inexperienced.

Please, alexnash, add some groping for those of us from the JAV universe interloping to check out the world of American porn!

        [deleted] Thanks a lot for your post! I love JAV videos too and I’ve been implementing some of those in my scenes as well. I usually try to give to an intro and tease good timing. The scene you mentioned actually is not mine and I haven’t watched it. SLR now has producers tags (if you want to use them) But I am sure other producers will be happy to hear your feedback as well. But is you have more good or bad examples with tag “AlexNash” or others please post them in this thread instead.

        https://forum.sexlikereal.com/d/3913-post-production-feedback

        I think we got way off the topic of this particular thread.

            Rustam1990
            25.03 Jennifer White & Megan Maiden
            27.03 Lily Starfire "Back in Your Arms"
            29.03 “Raw Taboo: Mean Sis”
            31.03 Molly Little - Step Sister Seduction
            According to schedule. Might be some adjustments, but for now like this.

                justsomedude101 Is the scene with April/Chanel/Madison changed to stepsister scene since the title is "Raw Taboo: Mean Sis" but Alex Nash said in another thread that it is converted to stepdaughter scene for whatever reason? Stepsister plot is way much better anyways @alexnash

                    stst12

                    Good catch, although I seem to remember it being mentioned somewhere else in the forum that two of the girls are sisters, the viewer is the stepdad, and the third girl is a friend of one of the sisters? So that might be it. Could just be my mind playing tricks on me too lol.